tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22055731.post116202201394440068..comments2024-01-06T11:19:53.852+00:00Comments on Kate Walker: First Page ChallengeKate Walkerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17277223651288830541noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22055731.post-1162503995384918702006-11-02T21:46:00.000+00:002006-11-02T21:46:00.000+00:00Hi Julie - I don't normally analyse my work like t...Hi Julie - I don't normally analyse my work like this - so it was an interesting exercise for me. Glad you like the repetition<BR/><BR/>Marilyn - I'm sorry! Of course I didn;t mean to teae ;-) (OK - yes I did!) But I promise you that you'll have a copy of that story just as soon as I can get one to you<BR/><BR/>Hi Amanda and welcome - I've learned a lot too - it is a very revealing exercise<BR/><BR/>Happy to help, Sharon - I've visited your contribution too - very intriguing. A time slip thriller soudns good<BR/><BR/>Hi Blue - it's great to learn more isn;t it - I don't think we ever stop learning, especially about writing. I've never seen a gray fox - red ones, yes - but I did google a picture and they are gorgeous!Kate Walkerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17277223651288830541noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22055731.post-1162209962000589642006-10-30T12:06:00.000+00:002006-10-30T12:06:00.000+00:00Thanks for posting yours, Kate. I'm learning so mu...Thanks for posting yours, Kate. I'm learning so much through reading these. <BR/><BR/>I've posted mine on my blog but my latest WIP isn't a romance - it's a time slip thriller (with a romance threaded into it) but I have to say that I'm missing writing a proper romance so I might just write one on the side.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22055731.post-1162072774975626752006-10-28T22:59:00.000+01:002006-10-28T22:59:00.000+01:00What an interesting exercise this is. I'm not sure...What an interesting exercise this is. I'm not sure I dare post anything myself but I'm learning a lot by reading the posts of those who have taken part.Amanda Colehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09054360923578138121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22055731.post-1162048993493766492006-10-28T16:23:00.000+01:002006-10-28T16:23:00.000+01:00OK Kate, not fair! While I can appreciate the exc...OK Kate, not fair! While I can appreciate the excerise I don't appreciate the tease.....I want to read Sicilian Husband, Blackmailed Bride NOW, I don't want to wait! Just kidding but it sounds like it's going to be another wonderful book. I enjoyed reading your post.Marilyn Shoemakerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17860682834201996869noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22055731.post-1162024264353083682006-10-28T09:31:00.000+01:002006-10-28T09:31:00.000+01:00Oooh I love how the prologue and the actual book b...Oooh I love how the prologue and the actual book begin exactly the same way but with two such different moods and points of view! That's a really effective technique. I do that sort of repetition sometimes but not so close together--I like it!<BR/><BR/>Thanks for taking my challenge Kate and I'm glad it got your brain going!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com